Setting the Scene


     The setting in a story is an essential element and can often be a character unto itself. Whether you feel the need to describe in excruciating detail the particulars of a room or are comfortable with stating only something as broad as the room’s generic name, the scene is going to play an important role for your reader.

     Everyone has a comfort level when it comes to setting the scene.

     There was a time in my early years where I felt it necessary to go almost to the thread-count of the sheets on the bed. Then, in a radical shift, I hardly described anything at all. Lines such as, “He walked into the bedroom and sat down.” were fairly common, and not entirely interesting.

     I like to think I’ve found a middle ground at this point, and that I’m adding enough to create a realistic scene.

     It’s easy enough to say, “He walked into the bedroom and sat down.”

     It’s a little more difficult to say, “Tom walked into his bedroom and sat down upon his bed, the old mattress groaning beneath his weight, and the smell of his own stale sweat fouling the air.” Now the reader knows several things about Tom: first, his mattress is old, and that for some reason he sweats. Enough so that it not only lingers, but he can smell it as well. And, as so many of us unfortunately discovered in our early teen years, just because we can’t smell ourselves doesn’t mean no one else can’t.

     With that sentence and that basic understanding about the room, we can fill out a little more about Tom. Does he have a glandular problem? Is he overweight? Is he so poor he can’t afford to wash his bedding? Or is he so ignorant that he doesn’t feel he has to?

     We, as authors, don’t need to delve too deeply into this, but it can be touched upon at any point past the bedroom, and it won’t take the reader by surprise. And, in the same breath, we don’t have to pass any more information along if we don’t want to. The reader has a feel for Tom’s room: his bed is old, and the room smells.

     We have given the reader enough, so they understand what’s in front of them, and they can make of it what they will.

     The scene doesn’t have to be everything, but it certainly must be more than nothing.

     As always, keep writing!


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Nicholas Efstathiou

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